Chidiebere... @Jeffchidex 1 year ago Mike, Sincere appreciation for this religious/spiritual content. Contents of this type is not often produced or seen in the social space. Thank you for reminding me once more, of the paraclete. ------- I can see that you did try to do an end rhyme. It is not easy to maintain a particular structure in writing poems. I applaud this discipline and talent.___ May I suggest that you can make your beautiful work even better by arranging better---- as I was reading, I felt that the poem would have read better if you properly sectionalized: Couplets or quatrains as the case may be.___At some other points , I felt that your rhyming limited your creativity. I feel that some of the words ending the lines in question were forced on you, because you had to keep to the structure. Perhaps once more revision will bring out the very best in this wonderful poem. Dalu!!!
